Why were revivals always held during the hottest month of the year? Carol Lou came out of the pond smelling like stagnant water, but that was less noisom than the smell of Avon perfume mixed with sweat hovering like a cloud over the bank of the pond. I prayed for a breeze to disperse the stench more ardently than the happy salvation promised by Jesus. Yikes! It makes my eyes water just thinking about it. —Doodles
I love the story, the story felt really real.
I love this story. You're such a good writer!
Great story, loved the comparisons throughout, really got your point across.
Why were revivals always held during the hottest month of the year? Carol Lou came out of the pond smelling like stagnant water, but that was less noisom than the smell of Avon perfume mixed with sweat hovering like a cloud over the bank of the pond. I prayed for a breeze to disperse the stench more ardently than the happy salvation promised by Jesus. Yikes! It makes my eyes water just thinking about it. —Doodles
Amazing story, I felt as if I was right beside you under the tent the whole time!
Thank you!
wonderful story! Really enjoyed reading it. Great writing!!
Thank you so much!